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Jimmy oversleeps

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Post by Graham Wed Mar 21, 2018 12:01 pm

It's not a winner yet. The last sentence needs tweaked.

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Jimmy overslept.

Christ, he thought, the plane. Quick, chuck it a’ in the bag: tickets, wallet, breeks. Noo, taxi, airport.

‘Hey, pal. Can ye stop at a Woolworths. Ah’ve got tae get presents fur the weans.’

’Woolworths mate? Wot century you from?’

Jimmy had overslept by fifty years

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