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Post by DavidK on Fri Mar 23, 2018 10:29 am

It materialised in my bathroom one Tuesday morning, looking like a normal bicycle.

I pumped up the tyres, adjusted the brakes and set off round Holyrood Park, speeding passed Salisbury Crags.

A small boy dropped his ice cream when I pulled back the handlebars and soared over the Commonwealth Pool.


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Post by Graham on Sat Mar 24, 2018 5:38 pm

It's better than mine. Time-travel - check. Scottish references - check. BTW don't include the title if you submit. It's part of the word count. No trademark David humour though?

And 'past' rather than 'passed' I would say.

Are you going to submit? You have nothing to lose.


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